Rise Above the Eternal--_ Interesting, but somewhat incoherent.
This is a worthwhile effort... trancy, and experimental, and as one may put it, bold. Despite this, the only thing that keeps it from becoming an amalgam is the melody that fades in at 55 seconds into the track... which doesn't rest on the root note. The sudden stop at 1:30 is abrupt and the melody that follows doesn't seem to flow logically, but it does work nonetheless. The next abrupt stop at 2:06 is accompanied by an automation or splicing click. It might be necessary to cut out that bridge altogether and run the middle flush with the end, or at least have a trance snare fill lead into the end. Overall, it strikes me as having the FLS sound and the guitar doesn't vary enough to contribute melodically, which leaves it in a percussive role.
I don't mean to be harsh, because I like the track, I just think these are some improvements that could make it even better. Keep it up!